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chainsaw check and let me guess you only have your play testing left

its been three days your a little hasty with this one tbh

Afraid not, real life got in the way and i hardly got any writing done in the past week.

I got the Swords all captured and bred, and Rosa is also bred, now I need to do their downtime scenes, after that is still Keldeo and Shauntel, THEN it's playtesting 

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Had an idea for Zygarde dream. Since she is about balancing life & death she would dream of being an accountant balancing the books (or accounts) of life and death incorporated. 

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Shes spent too much time talking with Dialga if thats what she's dreaming about

Had a couple side scene related ideas. First, it would be fun to have a Skitty/Delcatty as a reference to the Hot Skitty on Wailord Action meme. Even have a good opportunity to introduce it since May has a Skitty in the anime and she was also out for the Wailord. The excuse could be that May's researching how a Pokemon that small can fit that much cock, and maybe part of the scene could be escalating the MC's size inside of her. Probably steps on Mew's toes a bit though.

Second thing is a couple of small thoughts for the Contest Minigame you mentioned at the Fishing Preview. Could use the MC's knowledge of Pokemon breeding and say he's there to help with pedigree breeding or the like. I also think it would be cool to use Purugly with this premise, but there's not much rationale there besides that a Purugly would stacked.

Skitty on Wailord is a must, I can see May insisting that her Pokemon needs to be as much of a size queen as she is.

The contest minigame would likely be all Gen 3 mons since that's where the contests originated, I need to plan out exactly what to do with it though

yes we really want to know if we get a new update and when? All the love Brpdchainsaw 😁

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I've got 1 more Legend to do, Keldeo, and 2 more Humans, Rosa and Shauntel.
After a bit of playtesting it will be ready!

How lovely thanks Brpdchainsaw

when should i expect the next update

When it's done, should be some point in January as long as reality doesn't punish me

good thing you don't have my luck because it would be pushed back till September if it was me

we all know that the MC as impregnated at a lot of people, but that made me so thinking how many kids does he technically have yes I’m gonna be doing the numbers of how many kids the MC has.

Wish me luck if I don’t return tell my dog I love him

i adopted him already he is pissed at you for leaving him he had to hold his pee and poo for two whole days before the cops came looking for you

Assume an average of 13 kids per pregnancy, it shouldn't be too hard to add up in the end.

Ik I'm too many update gens ahead, but I have an idea for the remaining two Regis. Ik that they will most likely be Andoirds like RegiIce, RegiRock and RegiSteel, but what if insted of fighting both we just fight RegiEleki and with RegiDrago a test on our knowlage of Dragon types. Plus I was thinking the same with the Galar Birds. Galar Articuno tests us on Psychic types and Galar Zapdos we fight. The idea for Galar Moltres is a lot harder as I enjoyed the insult game with the normal Moltres, but idk how to interupit that into a different way for her.

I think the Regis will all be fights, they wouldn't really have any desire to test the MC knowledge.

The Galar Birds are something I need to think more about, I used them as the basis for the Kanto birds' personalities, maybe the galar versions could be the same ideas but way more extreme.

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An alternative idea to Keldeo & Thundurus that is less dark can be the human war was already in progress (not caused by Thundurus) and Thundurus found it annoying so sent a thunderbolt down to stop the Flames of War from consuming the region. The fire was unfortunately near where Keledeo was and resulted in her getting separated from her family but this did force the two human sides to work together and allowed peace talks to happen thus putting an end to the war.

I might be able to work with an idea more like this, we'll see

Oh ! I remember seing a missing part ! The last girl of Sinnoh, Maylene, when I clic on "pussy" have the 1rst part of the text but not the second one.

You're right! How the heck did I miss that?!

It may be lost in the sea of good text you do :3

so what planned for gen 6, 7, 8 and 9 once gen 5 is ready?

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After Chapter 5, I want to do a Quality Update, going over the stuff from chapters 1 and 2 to bring them up to my current standard, add a bunch of side scenes and some minigames.

Thanks to all the suggestions I get, I have a lot of the later chapters planned out already

can't wait to see them als one question will we see what the children look like once they hatch and we watch them grow up and we take care of them just out of curiosity do you plan to do that or no?

Had an idea for Keldeo since she was separated from her family by a forest fire apparently started by a human war but what if Thundurus had started that fire which made the two human sides think the other was attacking and started that war. Thundurus inadvertently caused Keldeo to be separated from her family but does not remember it. Keldeo confronts Thundurus about it to get some kind of closure on her past that if she cant find her family while training around the world at lest have found the one who inadvertently caused it.

That might be a bit dark, I'll see if I can write a scene like that and do it justice, but no promises

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If not thats ok. Could be that Thundarus saw the human war (already in progress) and found it annoying so sent a thunderbolt thinking it would stop the war but it instead started the fire but did help stop the fighting yet did lead to Keldeo being separated from her family. 

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I had an idea !! Like Groudon is obese and that Kyurem will be, why not shipping them ? Groudon the hot obese and Kyurem the cold obese. They could love each other's obesity and try the fatten up the other ! Honestly I would love to see a friendship build between this two and the main theme is a friendly competition about "who's gonna fatten up the most the other ?" and they both love to be fattened and getting bigger ^^ There's the link of fatness, there's too the link of one is lava hot and the other ice cold but it can be too contrast with the rivalry Groudon - Kyogre who is a dislike one about being the better with the rivalry Groudon - Kyurem who would be a friendly one about making the other the bigger. And if others fat-related pokémons are added latter they could join the fun ! A bit like Lugia and her Anal Whore class :3

Already got a plan along these lines!

Oooh, great !! And I though afterf ward, maybe Kyurem is friend with Kyogre too like she's fat too, and so Groudon and Kyogre get rivals about "who will fatten up the more Kyurem" and Kyurem try to turn this rivality into a friendship rivality, but it's hard ? ^^

For Arceus since she can change her type to any of them could she when its time to have the MC taste her milk to let him try ALL the colors of the milky rainbow since the type could change the flavor. Ex: for the Fire type it can taste like primordial fire with a feeling of warmth and enlightenment. It would be a lot of flavors for him to try!

Whole rainbow of titty juice!

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Question what are the plan for Arceus changing into other types with the plates? She was not in the AWC meeting with Giratina though if she was to go to AWC she would ask Lugia for a private lesson to not embarrass her daughter and make Giratina say something like "kill me now I'm about about to die of embarrassment" after seeing her mother present her but for the class to see. Plus Lugia would love to get her hands on the ass that all other asses are modeled off of. Plus when she can turn dragon type for her massage later on.

Also had a bit too complex but really funny idea of at the end or past gen 7 region when the MC wants to walk around the city/town and all the legends decide to follow him around and all the citizens think its a parade to the legendary Pokémon seeing giants and goddesses walk around following the MC since he will have so many legends caught by then. I know this will be a bit to complex to put in but is a way to show how big his harem has gotten by then.

I might have her play around with her plates in various points throughout the rest of the story, there's a lot of them so I can use them to get her into all kinds of shenanigans!

Her showing up to embarrass Giratina at the AWC sounds hilarious!
I can see Rayquaza arguing she's not a real dragon when she's getting the massage.

A parade could be fun!

Yo do y'all know what song we can make of this game it's just an idea hmmm

Song?

You know how Pokemon have a song I was wondering can we make one for this game like a song it's just an idea

hey, chainsaw is a quick question what are the art styles that you use to make your AI images?

I don't specify an art style anymore, I used to say "Anime Style" or "Manga Style" but it didn't make much difference

I know it's a dumb idea to ask but can Toxicroak be added to Sinnoh, I want ma boi to be represented more somehow.

Maybe at some point

I have seen some small spelling errors in Ch 4.

During Heatran's battle in the sentence "Groudon open her mouth wide and fires back with ehr own burst of molten rock," the open can be "opens" and the ehr to "her". 

Next is during battle with Arceus with the sentence "Arceus's body glows brighter and her huce tits start to bounce as energy builds" the huce can be huge.

Next is after battling Arceus with the sentence "Arceus has a point, you did know up her daughters before meeting her," the know can be "knock" up her daughters that would make more sense.

And last one I found is when the MC visits Rayquaza in her dream when Cresslia says just after the picture of Rayquaza picture "This seems more life it would be your dream" the life would become "like"  to make more sense.

Still an awesome game.

Thanks for the report, I'll get these fixed up!

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Another tiny misspell is when Latios is just about to get her massage in the sentence "your fingers gig into her shoulders and she steely demeanor melts like butter" the she before steely demeanor can be changed to "her steely demeanor melts" to make more sense.

Also in the AWC meeting "Uxie and Azelf are a little more retrained" the retrained can be "restrained". 

Another in same event of AWC meeting is "Cresslia practically skips to the from of the room" the from can be "front" of the room. When she is chosen. 

Thanks again for the reports!

my first chainsaw check of the new year

Got Terrakion written as far as her breeding scene and started on Virizion.

I wanted to do more but real life got in the way again...

I'm sure I can get the Swords finished some time next week, then it's on to Keldeo!

Quick question then, when you have the swords done what would you say is the progress bar for gen 5? Since I'm guessing it's swords-genies-myths-main trio

Myths and Swords are coming in part 1, the Main Legends and the Genies are coming in part 2

Nice, Thx for the info

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Happy New Year, I may be jumping a head a little with requesting a check on progress, but I also have a few questions since a change from my predictions has been stated. 

1. I see that the swords of justice are the ones being grouped together to share a human. I'm curious who that is, with my best guess being Caitlin since they are similar to knights and she is described as being a "princess" personality wise. 

2.Because of this I'm also curious of the plans for the Genies since I'm not sure if they are going to be done like the swords or have their own human pairings, checking past comments they are going to be in the second part (though maybe this has changed feel free to correct) so I'll share some adjusted predictions. 

Tornadus and Skyla: Flying type; simple as. 

Thunderus and Elesa: Electric type; simple as. 

Landorus and Shauntal: process of elimination on my part, curious to hear connection you may have thought of.

Enamorus and Professor Juniper: Juniper has been moved around alot in my mind, but I think it makes sense that a Pokémon scientist would be curious to see a legendary who was believed to be extinct

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Happy New Year Blahblahdo!

I do take predictons and requests into account when pairing them up, but sometimes in the moment another idea just feels better.

The Swords are going to Rosa, I'm giving her Hugh's whole desire for justice thing against Plasma, so they'll fit with her.

The Genies ARE getting split up though, Tornadus and Thundurus are getting paired up exactly how you guessed, Landorus us going to Caitlin because I had nothing else to pair her with.

Juniper is going to be like Erica where you need to fuck other Humans to unlock her, specifically Hilda Bianca and Rosa, since those are the girls she gives Starters to

hmmm ok I get it but now I'm left wondering if there is a character from gen 5 I have missed, or if I have made a mistake in assuming Enamorus or Keldeo is getting a human pairing so I guess here are some questions. 

1. Is Keldeo getting a pairing or are they also being paired with the Swords and Rosa?

2. Is Enamorus getting a pairing or are they being left isolated 

3. If they are both getting pairings, whose name is missing from this list of potential characters/already confirmed characters

  • Lenora
  • Roxie
  • Elesa
  • Skyla
  • Shauntal
  • Caitlin
  • Iris
  • Professor Juniper
  • Rosa
  • Bianca
  • Hilda
  • Anthea and Concordia

You only need to answer one of these for the picture to become clear. Also curious about how progress is going, as you seem to be approaching the end of part 1

Kaldeo is going to Shauntel, she wants a tragic story to write about in her next book.

Enamorus isnt getting paired, shes not technically a Gen 5 Legend, I think she counts as Gen 8 actually, maybe I can  do something with her later on.

I think that's all the humans I had, I don't have my list in front of me right now though...

I am definitely getting closer to part 1 being complete!

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Happy New Year everyone.

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you too 🎉😌

You too

Had a little complex idea about when Celebi meets Terapagos to be a friendship paradox. When the MC first met Celebi in the second region she at that time has NOT met Terapagos at all in her past since born and does not know about Terapagos existence yet. Now fast forward to when the MC meets and gets Terapagos and either on the ship or a side event while still in that region Celebi now meets Terapagos for her first time BUT Terapagos immediately recognizes Celebi because Terapagos at this time with the MC has already met Celebi in her past. The two of them become best friends for life immediately and Terapagos tells info about herself. 

Up to here Celebi has now met Terapagos and is a best friend to her. Terapagos then can say she knew of a (berry/fruit?) that Celebi, her and the MC would love the taste of but sadly it went extinct a long time ago. Celebi decides to travel back in time to where the fruit was to bring back so her best friend and the MC can try it. When she gets to the past she meets Terapagos BUT Terapagos has not met Celebi before BUT just like in the present they become best friends for life and tells her a little of the MC before leaving to go back to the present. Terapagos forgets about what was said about the MC since its such a long time but she does not forget about her best friend she made thus its why she recognized Celebi immediately  in the present even though Celebi has not met her yet. 

Once Celebi returns to the present they could both have sex with the MC together. A funny bit would then be once Celebi returns Dialga would walk past them and say/think she is not getting involved with those two headaches and since its not causing the world to end or the time line to unravel she is just going to keep walking with her pregnant belly going swaying side to side with each step and enjoy her way overdue vacation. Its a bit complicated but would fit with Terapagos paradoxes.

Also will the Fishing mini game be used in any other regions, not all of them but it is a good design and a good way to meet some of the fish types.

I think I get the idea.

Celebi never met Terapagos, makes sense since Tera is far below ground where Cel would never go.
Tera recognizes Cel after being caught and they become friends.
Cel travels back in time to find a gift for Tera and meets much younger Tera.
This is where Tera recognizes Cel from.

Is that right?

Also, I don't want to add later Fish to the minigame, it's only supposed to have a few in it as a small distraction, plus later chapters will have their own minigames.
Maybe I'll bring fishing back at some point in a different chapter, but that's just a maybe.

That is correct. A Friendship Paradox.

hey chainsaw, how exactly do you make the game? And I don’t mean what website you use but what do you do to make it? And how do you get the AI pictures to look so good? Because eventually, I may try to make a game like this.

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The pictures only really look good because I make a ton of them and pick the best ones, but I can probably give a bit of advice.

I find that simple prompts tend to work better, use plain words over slang, like I find that "Breasts" works better than Boobs or Tits when making boob focused images.
If you're making images of an existing character (like a Pokemon) try putting just their name in first to see how the AI recognizes it, after that you can add other prompts to fine tune it into what you want.

I hope that you do have a go at making a game, I'll be happy to give any writing/coding advice if you need it!

thank you, but first I think I need a check if the images can be generated correctly to see if this game could be possible

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Dont forget, you can always pull the parody card and make something "inspired by" the original, that way the designs don't have to be exact.

One thing I've found helpful recently, if the character you're trying to make has a Wikipedia page with a description of their appearance, copy it into ChatGPT or something like it and ask

Summerise the following passage in 15 short words or phrases, separate each one with a comma

The list it gives you should be a good start to use as prompts!

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thank you I was thinking of the idea of them being in there, classic air quotes form, and then being turned into humans then they will be fucked

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how do you decide the legendaries’s health 

you mean in the fights?

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There's no real logic behind it other than giving the sub legends less and the full legends more

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how did you make this? It would be awesome if there was a Miss Kobayashi dragon maid ver. (Excluding Kana, Shouta, etc.)

I do agree with you. I really do hope that this game will make more people wanna make games like this.

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I hate to sound like a nerd but having all the dragons with you would be nice, especially Lucoa

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I use a program called Twine, it's fairly easy to use for simple games like this.

If you want a Miss Kobayashi version, you could try making one!

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Im doing it but im having a bit of trouble, could you give any tips?, I keep getting errors

If you post a screenshot of the error messages, I might be able to help.

One thing I should mention, there's different modes in Twine for writing, I use the one called Sugarcube, so that's the one I'll be best at helping with

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so far I fixed most of the errors but I would appreciate if you could tell me what I could improve in (Its still very unfinished) https://twinery.org/2/#/stories/d72bdd04-8b18-4700-baef-af7bc0e2478c btw im using harlowe, if it helps any I could switch to sugarcube

You can't link your story like that, I think you have to publish it and upload the html file to your comment.

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Hope everyone has a Happy New Year!

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Happy New year to you two

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Happy New Year!

the Deoxys translation guide makes no sense what cipher is the dialogue even using? i can't for the life of me make sense with any of it, i don't have the mental capacity to solve the puzzle in the guide and the link to the cipher decoder doesn't help, i need simple solutions like what the key is and what cipher i need to decode, i want to find out what it says but its literally impossible

There's a simplified version with better instructions coming in the next update.
I agree now that I made the first version of her code too difficult/complicated

ok thank you, pretty sure i was going to have a emotional breakdown for a hot minute

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Still think you should include a button that that just translates it.

You're right 😇

Another option for  Yveltal breast milk could be to call it white chocolate or white milk chocolate. 

Also an idea for a fish Pokémon for the fishing mini game could be Luvdisc. They can have the nickname "succubus of the sea" since one of their moves are draining kiss, so they would be very skilled at draining males of their cum. A funny bit of info could be that if a luvdisc really likes a male then if that male gets into the water even oceans away the luvdisc will know and very quickly arrive and suck him almost like a shark can detect blood in water from far away.

That could work, saying it tastes of chocolate or is simply as rich as chocolate. 

The fishing minigame takes place in chapter 2, so it's only gen 1 & 2 fish...

Mostly gen 1 to be honest, gen 2 didn't add many that could be fished up

I just checked the fishing tables in Gen II and yeah it seems to be mostly Gen 1 Fish, with the only Gen 2 being Corsula, Remoraid, and the Chinchou Line and with those 4 you kinda need to be picky. 

Idk what is currently in the fishing mini game but an idea rather then have the MC fuck a Remoraid, fishing one brings a Mantine over. I think someone else has pitched this before but that's probably worthwhile.

I might add some more fish to the minigame later, but for now I don't want to waste more time on this update, I need to get it out already!

Chainsaw check and if you wouldn’t mind, if it’s not done then tell us how soon it will be done in days

I finally finished my super-size side scene and I've got Cobalion done for now, she'll be sharing a side scene and a Human character with Terrakion and Virizion who I'll be doing next.
I have made a start on Terra already.

No idea how many days are left

Well, that’s great to hear but if you don’t know how many days let’s just say we’ll be done in the next week

I doubt it, I've got 3 mons to do and 2 humans. 

Plus a couple days playtesting

ok

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Sorry I'm late but merry Christmas

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And to you as well.

In my opinion until New Year’s happens, it’s still Christmas so happy Christmas to you

Had an idea for Yveltal foe her milk tasting that she has eaten so much chocolate and never gotten tired of it that her milk is brown and also tastes liker dark chocolate and if anyone week was to taste it they would die. Thus death by chocolate or chocolate of death yet the MC is strong enough that he can enjoy it without worry.

Xerneas milk taste would change as the MC drinks it from different soups and drinks to fit with and ends with desert flavor since she has eaten so many diff types of food by then.

I've tried making the milk different colors but the Ai won't play along.

I would like to suggest that the reason Xerneas never got pregnant before the MC was since she intimidated most other Pokemon like Maple said Legends do at the start. She's probably how the scientists figured that out too.

That and she would be so rough and forceful that she makes any that get near hear want to just run away from the pain even though there is no chance of death or being permanently hurt only the MC is willing to go through being pounded.

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That's pretty much the reason for all of them.
What Gameswitch said is going to be part of it too

Sorry, should have specified, meant in spite of the pre-existing breeding kink. Mostly just thought the bit about Maple figuring that part out from her would be funny.

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Merry Christmas/Happy Holidays everyone!

same to you, my friend

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Merry Xmas ^^

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😇 have a good Christmas and always love your family and what you think for that’s the best thing if you could think about I’m being honest I do use Google translate 

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☃️🎅🍪🥛 Be thankful what you have in life think about all the good times make people happy you make you happy 😊 about a good time and be thankful have a good Christmas 

friend group rant 

Over the countless days of the MC's adventure to breed every legendary it was a matter of time before his girls became friends with each other and make groups with each other. Now the friend group situation works this simple. I will give a brief description about the group. Who's in the group and how they interact with the MC. And Second some girls can be in more than one group.

The birds: members Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres, Cresselia, Tornadus, Fezandipiti, Ho-Oh, Yveltal

The birds group is one of the oldest groups on the boat. It was founded by Ho-Oh. The purpose of this group is just to simply help each other help them fix their feathers help each other fly when they get pregnant again just to fly around a bit and just kind of have a nice time together.

interactions with the MC. This group does not do a lot with the MC. He mostly just watches them fly around.

Team Emotional support: members Silvally, Ogerpon, Mewtwo, Yveltal, Genesect, Pecharunt

This group was founded by Mewtwo and its main purpose is to help the legendary with a horrible self image of themselves and have gone through tragic events. What they doing in this group is that they sit around for our each other talk about the day they had talk about themselves in a more positive white, and if one of them accidentally insults themselves, the others were refuted and say how good of a person they are. It's working, but it's going slower than a lot of people would probably like, but they're being more positive about themselves. 

interactions with the MC. For his part, he just sit in on their conversations to listen to them. But he also shows them with compliments to try to help cheer them up.

The gremlins: members Uxie, Mesprit, Azelf, Chi-Yu, Terapagos, Mew, Celebi, Jirachi, Manaphy, Shaymin, Diancie, Meloetta, Hoopa, Marshadow, Melmetal, Pecharunt

The gremlins group, lovely names by the MC. Is one of the most active groups on the ship the group is mainly made out of the shortest legendary usually arranging 1'00" through 2,00". What does group does for most of the time is just have fun playing ball games playing more physical games like tag or hide and seek or playing pranks on the other girls and the MC they never truly malicious. They're just made to have some fun. The founder of this group is Mew.

interactions with the MC. He usually gets Pranked by them most of the time. But on a couple of occasions when he laid down to take a nap, he found himself covered in them when he woke up.

The machines: members Regirock, Regice, Registeel, Regieleki, Regidrago, Miraidon, Genesect, Magearna, Melmetal

The machines is a group of legendary that just hang out with each other once in a while. Well hanging out is one word that most of the other girls will not use usually they just stand around each other and just do things. No one really knows what this group does on their free time.

interactions with the MC. He doesn't really know what they're doing either, but he does do something for them. Once in a week, he goes and cleans them, making them all bright and shiny.

Team hot: members Moltres, Entei, Heatran, Landorus, Ting-Lu, Chi-Yu, Ho-Oh, Groudon, Reshiram, Zygarde, Solgaleo, Victini, Volcanion

this team formed around the same time as team cold did. This team is mostly made out of ground and fire type Pokémon with a exception of Solgaleo pick thank you represent the sun. The formation of these two teams were made by Groudon and Kyogre. To have more friendly competitions with each other to prove who superior.

interactions with the MC. He is actually the one that came up with the idea of these two groups after stopping one of their fights. 

Team cold: members Articuno, Suicune, Regice, Tapu Fini, Glastrier, Chien-Pao, Lugia, Kyogre, Palkia, Kyurem, Manaphy, Keldeo, Volcanion

Team cold was formed around the same time as team hot. The members of the team are all water or ice type. Besides Lugia she's the guardian of the sea so they allowed her to be in here. Team cold, and team hot have constant challenges against one another. Whichever team wins will get bragging right until the next challenge begins usually on Monday. Volcanion will join the losing team for the next challenge to make it a higher possibility of them Winnie then she goes to help the other team.

interactions with the MC. He is the judge of these challenges to make sure there's no cheating involved.

The spaceies: members Palkia, Solgaleo, Lunala, Necrozma, Eternatus, Jirachi, Deoxys

The group known as the spaceies are all the Pokémon that live or came from space. What this group does for most of the time it's just talking to each other, but no one can figure out what they're talking about because they're all talking in the Deoxys language. Palkia what was the one that started this group to make Deoxys feel more included on the ship because she didn't really have a lot of friends let's say.

interactions with the MC. He mostly tries to listen to the conversation trying to figure out what the hell they're saying he's able to figure out two words, though boobs and ass.

The mom: members Regigigas, Cobalion, Tapu Kokom, Enamorus, Lugia, Ho-Oh, Rayquaza, Zygarde, Mew, Arceus, Zarude

The Mom group is mainly made out of the the legendary that take care of other legendary. They spend most of their days eating snacking and just having friendly chat with each other. Talk about how annoying it is just keeping a eye on some of them because I always find a way to get in fights. And all the times they talk about how much they love them how much they bring joy to them. Another thing they talk about is how adorable the MC is.

interactions with the MC. The MC for his part sometimes when they start talking hands up, sitting with them and just listening to them.

gym squad: members Zapdos, Raikou, Cobalion, Virizion, Terrakion, Thundurus, Tapu Kokom, Urshifu, Regieleki, Okidogi, Zekrom, Zamazenta, Koraidon, Miraidon, Keldeo, Marshadow, Zeraora

The Jim squad is mostly made out of all the electric and fighting types. This group's main purpose is true spread body positive and good health positive. Making sure all the girls stay healthy. And have positive ideas for their body. Also to help burn some of that baby fat some girls like it, but others wish to get back in shape. The second thing this group does is friendly challenges with its members. Who can run around the ship fastest who can lift the heaviest? But they are separated in three categories. Not pregnant. Pregnant. And heavily pregnant. The reason why they did this is just to make sure everyone has a fair shot.

interactions with the MC. The MC loves watching them work out and he also loves how positive they go to all the other girls.

The Gardners: members Virizion, Tapu Lele, Tapu Bulu, Wo-Chien, Ogerpon, Xerneas, Zygarde, Zacian, Calyrex, Celebi, Shaymin, Diancie, Magearna, Zarude

The gardeners are mostly made of the grass and fairy type legend berries. They are actually probably one of the most chill and friendliest groups on the boat. What they do is just walk around, tending to the plants and also helping any of the other bills if they're having they have pain somewhere they kind of like the doctors of the ship.

interactions with the MC. The MC helps take care of the plant with them. There's always nice just chilling and not doing anything extreme.

The edge Lords: members Glastrier, Spectrier, Giratina, Necrozma, Eternatus, Darkrai, Marshadow

The edge lords are made out of the legendary that just have a act to keep up that are either antisocial or they just don't ride well with the other girls oh they're just trying to be cool. No one really knows.

interactions with the MC. The MC likes messing with them a couple times just giving them compliments that make them a little irritated, but they do blush pretty hard

Massage group: members Latias, Latios, Regidrago, Rayquaza, Dialga, Palkia, Giratina, Rayquaza, Zekrom, Kyurem, Zygarde, Necrozma, Eternatus, Koraidon, Miraidon

The massage parlor is mainly frequent by the dragon, legendary some of the other girls do give a massage a shot, but it doesn't have the same effect as it does on the dragons Rayquaza is the manager of this group making sure all the girls have equal rights to get a massage but mainly her she gets a lot of them.

interactions with the MC. The MC is the one that gives the massages to the girls.

AWC: members Latias, Latios, Uxie, Mesprit, Azelf, Cresselia, Tapu Lele, Spectrier, Munkidori, Mewtwo, Lugia, Giratina, Solgaleo, Lunala, Necrozma, Calyrex, Mew, Celebi, Jirachi, Deoxys, Victini, Meloetta, Hoopa, Marshadow, Pecharunt

I don't really need to say anything about this group do I like we all know what it does we all know what they do we all know the purpose of this group like I'm not gonna waste my time going over everything we know because this is one of the oldest groups in existence.

interactions with the MC. The MC likes watching that's all he really does with this group he put a hidden camera and a hidden microphone in there so he can watch them all secretively, but most of the time he just wants them straight up

ending thoughts I'm not expecting most of this to get in the game. I'm not expecting even half of this to get in the game, but the reason why I did this was too simply help chainsaw with character writing to see who would interact with who who would be more friendly with each other is too simply help chainsaw right his characters. But also I do want the The gremlin to be part of this game because it would be funny.

I might keep this idea for the epilogue chapters, the MC could see how his girls are getting along as he sails back home

ok

I wonder if you give to Zekrom humongous boobs, to Reshiram humongous rear and made Kyurem fat :3

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That's already the plan!

Fantastic !! <3

why not... YIPPEE *yippee is high-pitched* ???

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Had a little crazy idea for Xerneas that involves the fountain of youth. She had inadvertently created the legend with her "Fluids" after she masterbated in one spot after so long and not be able to do elsewhere due to Zygarde created the water that is pure life energy. So when the MC meets her and inflates her the water would go from clear to white for obviuse reasons. The fountain of youth then turns into the "Fountain of Fertility" where any female that bathes in the water ends up pregnant with a dozen kids. So when the MC revisits the region at the very end of the game he would see a lot more pregnant Pokémon and/or humans in that region where. Xerneas would love the idea that there would be more giant pregnant bellies in the world with that.

Each time Yveltal would try to pleasure herself she would kill her own mood to do it.

I could probably make it so the fountain is where the MC finds Xerneus, there's got to be somewhere in Kalos I can fit it in.

I might put Yveltal in that one desert, it seems like the lifeless kind of place she'd hang out.

Xerneus being addicted to masturbating and Yveltal not being able to is a fun idea

I think maybe that it'll be better if she can masturbate all she want but can't cum by herself. That would make Yveltal into someone who always crave to cum, in a perpetual heat and it would not be helped by Xerneas who would always tease her without touching her in any way but will make herself cum in front of Yveltal. They both love each others and even if she can't cum Yveltal love this teasings from Xerneas who's a real slut. Xerneas, who can cum when she want, would be submissive and sweet in her sexual encounters. She already got fucked by people who reached her but never got pregnant because they don't have the MC metamorph's cock. She would act all teasy and submissive. Yveltal, on the contrary, don't have many encounters, at least way less than Xerneas and is obsessed with the idea of getting fucked again and again. That make it so that she can't cum for years, years filled by Xerneas' teasings. The encouters she have are when people found her by accident while searching for Xerneas and she's a godess of death because she fuck them again and again and again until they can't take anymore, and so Yveltal would be dominant.

What do you think of this ? ^^

hows progress with the UNOVA region? Is volcarona going to be included as a side quest it felt like they were planned to be a legendary or a mythic?

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Unova is getting steadily closer to its first update being ready, still a lot to do though.

Volcorona will get a side scene, not a quest.
It's too cool a Mon to not give some love (and some loving) to

yes!

i cant wait to see how to get phione ngl

Hate to disappoint you, but there's not going to be any Phione.
I don't count it as a Legendary

thats fine its your game after all

Had a idea for the food Yveltal like and it would be chocolate. She would like it since it can make a person feel a little happy and since she has been hated and feared she would take any kind of feeling of happiness she could get. Now that she is with the MC she now has access to ALOT more chocolate and any food with chocolate. Since it was said that as she gets more life energy she would get plumper, her eating ALOT of chocolate at a time can increase her weight with it. She would also think there is more of here for the MC to love and love it.

Her dream could be that she dreams she is Charon the ferrywoman of the river styx taking souls to the land of the dead. 

For Xerneas food with her being chaotic her food would also be chaotic where it would be weird food combinations she would be craving to have combined like for example: pickles and peanut butter sandwich with wipe cream frosting. 

Her dream could be something like the game "Goat Simulator" that is chaotic with things that make no sense but fits. When the MC goes to see the dream they find Darkrai in the room looking at Xeneas dream and taking notes on how to make dreams more chaotic from her. 

It would be funny if since Yveltal is not as evil as Darkrai thought she would be surprised that she likes the chaotic side of Xerneas even though its a fairy type.

Yveltal would love the DARKEST of Dark Chocolate!
I can see her in the dream wondering why her boat is sitting lower in the water than it used to, she's chubbing up in her dreams too.

Xerneas probably would want to experience as many things in life, that would likely mean mixing random food together.
The dream fits too, she'd come up with the most bizarre nonsense ever, maybe like the Meet the Pyro video?

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Now that is a perfect kind chaotic for her dream.

And for Yeveltal not only would the boat be a little lower in the water but also less souls would fit in the boat due to her taking more room.

chainsaw check

Written Cobalion and did some more work on that mega sized side scene, I'll be moving onto Terrakion next and then Virizion.
I think I'll match the Swords to Rosa, she does fight against Team Plasma alongside Hugh so she might want to see some Legends that represent Justice!

good to hear

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