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Don't want to make you do like 100 quick fixes but I'm translating ALL Deoxys Dialogue (I'm a psycho) and found a typo just after finishing the last question. 

180:

(2Ag34w! 1Nz b76uubd4o j7svq46i m7w 4vi4ppc 2u6vtqp8i!)

Yes! My attack forme is relly strong!

If I find more it will be edited in below and I will mention when im finished so you can fix all of them at once instead of over and over. 

In the breeding scene: 

(2G9ctvh2 ku uw41di b o8jd6f q8mb6ofu, 6J ofw52gt yc2pv 8vq n57g2c5xg!)

Eartf is such a nice planet, I never want to leave!

Also some normal typos 

the soft sand of the beach, ker lips stay locked to yours 

like a raging river, you plane your hand on hers

Her capture scene: 

(3Brx3 1xb3qw ph5 5w2q1 1hp jo4 xliv4v1f?

4M8 9hsr'x5 xlmr9o q6c fyx8x am9pp 7jm15u.)

You want me to go in therre?

I don’t think my butt will fit.

Normal typo

how about a space threesome with a Scientist and a Virus?/

Deoxys Downtime (ass) 

(4gy7q mrw9mh2g Ocu5vgt, K 6ecp4 1ublf1 j5u6 bmm!)

cum inside Master, I can take it all! (capitalize)

Flannery first fuck scene (this was a typo I saw before decided to put it here)

Flannery finishes dropping her jeans and lean0s against one of the Sauna benches

Regi Maintenance (Registeel) (I decided that if I find any particularly bad typos/mistakes anywhere to let you know here no longer just deoxys)

QUERY DETECTED - OVERHEAD LIFTING PROGRAM OBJECTIVE (this is a line by regirock but its not coloured)

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I appreciate the diligence!

I won't update just to fix those, so they'll have to stay that way until Sinnoh (unless I get a report of something being seriously broken)

I might be able to find a way to get Deoxys and Maple together, but it won't be for a long time.

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Understandable, but also I will note the line "how about a space threesome with a Scientist and a Virus?/" wasn't a request but a line from Maple with a leftover /

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Oops, I forgot that I wrote that

Still, I should write it as a scene

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So I know this is probably not for everyone but will there be more scenes with Liza brother or other characters like him and is there away for him to get pregnant as well

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Up to dev if they want more femboy content though I doubt pregnancy would occur with them. Tate is feeling the effects of Liza being pregnant mind you so take that as a consolation prize.

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I'm probably going to add more femboy scenes but they'll be one and done like Tate was, so they won't return afterwards I'm afraid

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I think I noticed this before but forgot to mention it but there is an HTML error when doing the Latios and Latias Quiz (first question, picking SP DEF)

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I see it, it just need one of these bad boys slapped in <

I think I'll fix that, maybe tweak a few other things, double check the Deoxys dialogue and then update the game again

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did latios have to be a futa? would have been nice to have a toggle for that at the very least for those that aren't into it, also there is a spelling mistake on the first practice cypher, it says neet instead of meet, the 2 before the v in the second line should be a one if the line is ment to translate as ?my butt i fUll of cum" instead of "ftll of cum" also there are a few other spelling mistakes through the messages now that i'm hand translating them, will try and find each one so they can be fixed, like the j in the thrid line after the 1 should be an l if the word your trying to put there is like

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Hmm... I thought I'd fixed all of Deoxys's dialogue already, maybe I missed the ones in the translation guide

I'd rather not go adding content toggles into my game, it's already a lot of work making it as it is, Latios isn't even the only futa I have planned, trying to write multiple versions of every scene involving those characters would be too much

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Just because I know the reason Latios was a futa am I wrong in thinking Heatran will be a futa? (literal 50/50 gender split and the only legend to do so from what I see) (also if your doing more futa may be smart to add it to the tag list when opening the game just so people can know) 

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I hadn't considered Heatran for the Futas but actually it would make sense.

I'll add the tag too

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i dont realy get this decipher thing with Deoxy. can someone help or sent the decoded texts?

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Figured out Deoxys's cipher by slapping it into a Caesar cipher decoder and fiddling around

I got tired of having to fiddle, so I got ChatGPT to write some Python code to decode it since I'm too tired and horny to write the code myself.

def decode_ciphered_text(ciphered_text):

    decoded_text = ""

    shift = 0

    for char in ciphered_text:

        if char.isdigit() and 1 <= int(char) <= 4:

            shift = int(char)

        elif char.isalpha():

            case_offset = ord('a') if char.islower() else ord('A')

            decoded_char = chr((ord(char) - case_offset - shift) % 26 + case_offset)

            decoded_text += decoded_char

        elif not char.isdigit():

            # Remove digits greater than 4 from the output

            decoded_text += char

    return decoded_text

# Example usage:

ciphered_text = "3abc2 DEF 1ghi 4JKLmno 56789"

decoded_text = decode_ciphered_text(ciphered_text)

print("Ciphered text:", ciphered_text)

print("Decoded text:", decoded_text)

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Would be cool to have like a pregnancy/harem check button at disposal, that way midtrhough the game you can just click, chose a captured pokemon and fuck it, you could also rebreed pokemons that have already given birth

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They said that rebreeding will be done automatically between updates for those who have given birth so it will sort of be a rotation of pregnant, heavy and birth. Also technically most of your Pokémon are kept on the ship while you go into the region to capture more that's the loop, meaning that it wouldn't be possible to do that because your not on the ship. They could add some in universe work around like a tablet with a camera of some sort but they already have their work cut out for them when they get back to work on the next update.  

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The Legends get impregnated again without you having to do anything, I've been writing the scenes to imply that they're getting fucked all the time offscreen

I am planning at some point (maybe after chapter 5) to go back and just add more scenes to previous chapters, so that will sort of give you what you want

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You may be taking a break but that doesn't mean one can't make predictions (again) time for a fat comment. (note: I assumed some pairing of Pokémon was going to occur so those assumptions were used otherwise there may have been a need for some more barrel scraping) 

The Lake Guardians and Dawn:  kind of process of elimination, Dawn was going to be a character 100% so link that to the empty slot

Dialga and Mars: Galactic Commander could be switched with Jupiter

Palkia and Jupiter: Galactic Commander could be switched with Mars

Giratinia and Fantina: Ghost trainer with the ghost legendary makes sense also an elite four member so seems necessary

Cresselia and Cheryl: In my mind, I imagine Cresselia to have big gentle mom energy like tucking you into bed and kissing you goodnight, especially as the counter to Darkrai and Cheryls design speaks to that greatly, also works for an upcoming prediction

Heatran and Bertha: Bertha is ground type and Heatran according to bulbapedia "represents the earths core" so matches energy

Regigigas and Bebe: Kinda out there however due to you making the regis a bunch of robots, you made Bebe, a computer technician, really fitting. Also wouldn't be too bad to see honestly because Bebe looks kinda hot in the TCG art example bulbapedia provides. 

Manaphy/Phione and Candice: Ice type trainer and the sea guardians (oh god its a 4 way battle now lol) seems fitting, I imagine the reasoning being wanting to see if she could freeze the sea. 

Darkrai and Marley: The goth looking character with the nightmare pokemon who is characterized as an edgy loner who is good deep down (sometimes) is very fitting to me. Also Marley and Cheryl are in the same group of specialized trainers so them sharing the Darkrai/Cresselia pair makes sense

Shaymin and Gardenia: Grass and grass simple as

Arceus and Cynthia: Originally this was Cynthia Giratinia but for the character that is possibly the most thirsted after and also a confirmed legendary nerd, she should get to meet god because to many people meeting her is also like meeting god fr fr. 

Hopefully I got most of these right lmao don't wanna make a mega thread again. Or who knows I may have written the chapter inadvertently lmao.

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I won't go into detail but you got a few of these right

Looking at my notes, I didn't have plans for who to match Darkrai and Cresellia with, so I think I'll go with your ideas and give them to Cheryl and Marley

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Alrighty then but I do have one ask I would like to know. 

was my grouping of the lake guardians and sea guardians correct or have you given yourself more work? 

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The lake guardians ARE going together, they're so similar in my mind that I don't see the point in seperating them

Manaphy and Phione... I'm not even sure if I want to include Phione, my only plan for them is to mention that attempts to breed Manaphys have always ended in Phione hatching out, but the MC might be able to get her to lay actual Manaphy eggs

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Thats fair Gamefreak doesn't even treat Phione like a mythical anyway

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Okay, I give up. May we know the cipher key that you used to scramble Deoxys’ dialogue?

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There is a guide already in the game, you get it if you either pass or fail her quiz.

But here's a short version

Basically the letters are just moved 1 2 3 or 4 places forward in the alphabet, just look for the numbers and change the letters after them, ignore anything higher than 4

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Are the mythicals in the game? Like Manaphy?

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Manaphy isn't in yet but she will be in the Sinnoh update

There are already other mythical in the game though

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When going after the lati siblings, in the river scene, if you pick the wings there's an error. I can go back and kee playing, but thought that I should say something.

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Thanks for the bug report, I've already had that one pointed out and I'll be uploading the fixed version soon!

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Is the Darkrai the girl in the sneak peak I know Cynthia and palkia there I don't know if that's Darkrai

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Yeah that's Darkrai, you'll have to wait to find out why she's so big 

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do you remember any of the prompts you used for groudon, rayquaza, kyogre and lugia?

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Groudon, Kyogre, and Lugia were all fairly similar actually
Their name, bbw, fat, huge boobs, belly
Then fill in details like making the nipples blue for Lugi and Kyo

Rayquaza was a little tricker, using her name along with Green serpent, long neck, long tail, and then a few details seemed to work

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Not sure if I'm a fan of every new design but I would say it'ss till good, I'm probably just to  stressed.

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Yeah, not every design is going to work, especially as I get further along and I run into less iconic Legends, but I'll try to get them as good as I can

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Neat update, dang, the Hoenn update was pretty beefy in terms of content, can't wait for more tbh. Also, a pretty interesting thing you did with Rayquaza where if you don't have the red kaiju and the blue orca, Steven will show up just to gatekeep you, it's pretty funny, and the addition of a few more ladies to fuck (Blue's Charizard through Daisy, Whitney's Miltank through Whitney) and a bit of a spoiler alert, an additional femboy (Tate through Liza), that's neat!

Also, just to do a bit of trolling, I translated the Deoxys questions for the dudes too lazy/mindfucked to translate (still not gonna give them answers and I wasted a good amount of time for this):
1. First: how tall am I?
2. What about my weight?
3. What level do I learn Psychic?
4. What's my Pokedex number? (surprised that an alien that crashed down to Earth learned about a Pokedex)
5. What's the highest my base attack can be?

So, this was an interesting content update with the thing I find most neat is that you transformed the Regis to be like, fucking Transformers without the "I can turn into a car" part, that's also nice. Once, again, I had fun with this, and bracing myself for more (there are a few errors, like a couple of Deoxys translation oopsies and forgetting to color some text for one of the Regis and grammatical errors that make my inner Grammarly die inside, but they are minor and ignorable)

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Wow that's a long comment!

First thing, I've already fixed up Deoxys's dialogue thanks to the link that Timekeeper0 left down below, hopefully that should soothe your inner nerd
Also, even she doesn't know how she knows her Dex number, she says as much!

Glad you liked what I did for the Regis, the AI wouldn't do anything with their names so I had to come up with something else, I figured that they're basically robots so why not just do that?

Also glad that the side scenes with Charizard and the others worked for you!

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What prompt did you yuse for latios

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anime, latios, blue and white, futa, futanari, big butt, big boobs, big blue dick, big balls, grouchy

I think that's what I used, I'd add other things depending on what I was trying to generate

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I would appreciate an option to auto translate Deoxys or something similar. I'm sure some people will find it quirky and amusing, but for me and likely a few others, it's mildly annoying to have to try to manually translate it.

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Maybe I'll add that option in a later update, not being able to understand Deoxys is kind of the point, translating her dialogue is more of an easter egg as a reward for the effort

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Brpd you have done it again already excited for what's next.

Godspeed you legend

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Arceus-Speed I think you mean!
After my break I can start the long long process of making Sinnoh

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Latias choosing wing the second time causes a bug or something, everything is just text then.

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Huh... I thought I fixed that one already... Oh well, guess I'm fixing it again

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Games still very good but i saw plenty of errors in Deoxys language, and also good use of a Gronsfeld Cipher, and really hope Deoxys can be understood in the future, and best wishs for the future of the game

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Gron-What Now? I'm not surprised that there's a few errors in her dialogue, I tranlsated it all manually

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Gronsfeld Cipher >https://www.boxentriq.com/code-breaking/gronsfeld-cipher< is basically what you use to make Deoxys language with a slight modification since it doesn't work the same way but similar

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Wow, that's going to make writing her dialogue WAY easier!

super thumbs up, loved the content, loved the art, and double loved those lovely legendary's.

Thanks for the thumbs up!

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nice game is sinnoh gona have regigigas and heatran?

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every legendary and mythical so yes

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They are indeed, I've got plans for Regigigas but not really sure what to do with Heatran just yet

Been playing the game from the beginning and it seems the image for celebi at the AWC in chapter 2 is currently and epic embed fail aka its not loading 

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Just finished chapter 3 and it was pretty good and I think worth the wait. Your idea to make the regis robots I think is a good work around for what are evidently hard designs to work with. Interesting implementation of Tate (lol) and I think overall those bonus side scenes are a success.  The one part that was challenging was deoxys and her language I may make a document to help me figure out how to translate it more consistently but interesting use of her forms which to be fair don't fit into your simple rule of 3s. Also will report that there are script errors in her section but I can see why she took up so much time.

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Oh yeah also hyped for darkrai unironically my favourite pokemon especially from just how much character they have overall in the games

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Thanks for the bug reports, I think I've got them fixed but I won't update just yet in case someone finds something else

I think I've got a pretty good plan for Darkrai, hopefully you'll survive the wait!

jerry-rigged a somewhat working python code to help with decoding her language.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13Bjz5f0v51vt8LFn48Q3XYO-IdD9Ao66-57ob72PZRc/...

so far it will take in input text and spit out four different output texts each one for if the letters are supposed to be 1 letter place before it to 4 letter places before it while also deleting any number above 4. don't know how to have it change the letters biased on the furthest number it sees in the text so that's the best i can do with it now.

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I wish I knew anything about Python, but that sounds pretty impressive!

isn't python for making games?

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python's just a coding language so it can be used to make a lot of things, though one of the reasons i got into using python for stuff is due to the fact that Visual novels can be made using Ren'py which is python based code.

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This game is great,

This game is a very good game for anyone who loves Parody Pron of Pokemon and Cumflation, the story is also very nice and I can recommend playing this game to anyone who likes twine games and a good story.

I will be waiting patiently for the download-able version of chapter 3, even if I have to start a new save-file anyway for my 100% now with the new scenes.

Overall a 10/10 Game that has a lot of replay ability due to you being able to choose a different order of getting the legendary Pokemon and that giving you a different comment of the other coresponding legendaries.

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Wow! A 10/10 review! Glad you're enjoying my work so far!

How is your other project going and what progress has it made in the hoen update? 

No more progress on the other project, it's still in its tech demo state
But that one is pretty much my lowest priority right now, maybe I'll work on it a bit before starting on Sinnoh.

Hoenn is about 99.9% done, I want to do one more playtest and then (as long as I don't find anything wrong) it'll be ready for release
Expect to see it in the next few days!

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Hows the apk thing going?

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You mean an Android version?

Haven't looked into it at all to be honest, maybe once this update is finished and posted, I'll see if there's anything I can do

ok thanks

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Hey great game, btw hows doing the next update

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Made it to the playtesting, then realized I completely forgot to write a pretty big section for one of the human characters

Once she's written, I'll playtest some more and then it's ready for release!

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Great game. My only nitpick is that Raikou doesnt appear very accurately. No mask, no jagged tail, no purple clouds. Just a yellow cat. Males me think the ai somehow pulled from the yokai called 'raikou' rather than the Pokemon.

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Sometimes the AI just doesn't give good pictures when I type in the Pokemon's name, so I instead get it to make a generic version instead

So Raikou is just Yellow Cat, the same will happen with the Regis and with Jirachi in the Hoenn update, I just couldn't get good images for them so I made something that I felt was close enough

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off topic about the game but what is your favorite Pokémon

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Ooh that's a tough one...
I want to say Nidoking or maybe Dracovish

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cool mine is Mudkip

Loved the game, favorite part about it was the quizzes really good overall game keep up the great work can't wait for the update i hope Rayquaza is big tbh because it is big in other games


i will be waiting 

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Rayquaza isnt exactly big here... long sure, but I saved the bigness for Groudon and Kyogre

Glad you liked the quizzes, there's a few more in the coming update

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they are good fun some real challenges to all people 

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Really love how tios works, nice simplistic choice system

Any chance we get to play with the professor and the Pikachu again to give each a second batch?

The Ai art is fitting, gives it a kind if Alternative universe feel.

Let us know if you ever make a Patreon or Discord for this and/or your other projects. I look forward to the next update 😄

Keep up the good work (and don't push yourself too hard)

I agree with all that you said, and I'll extend your question : will we be hable to impregnate pokémons that we already impregnate after that they lay their eggs ?

i think they said something to that extent but seems like something to test in the following update not the one they currently work on

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It will happen automatically, i wont be writing scenes for it all though

Mostly the pokemon will be in different stages of pregnancy as they show up in later chapter, like if mewtwo showed up around chapter 5, she'd be heavily pregnant again

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Pikachu, probably not

Professor Maple, I've got a few plans for  


I doubt there will ever be a patron or discord, writing these adventures is just a hobby, I do it for fun!

Ooooh, I liked Pikachu ! I hope we'll be hable to impregnate her again :3 Or maybe she's permanently fertilised because of the experiment and constantly get pregnant after laying her eggs, each time with a bigger amount of eggs ?

Maybe I'll find a way to fit her in again later on?
We'll see.

I sure hope ^^

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I would like to say, this is an amazing game! 

I got nothing else. But have a great day!

Thanks! Hopefully the update will be amazing for you too!

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Today's Feb 23 next month is march

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Indeed it is, I am aware of the passage of time thank-you

If you're reminding me of when I said the update would be out, then please don't, I only give estimates because I don't know if I'll get delayed or not

Firstly, I want to thanks you. I love your story and, even if I would love that Lugia enjoy more to feel pleasure in it's other hole, I love every characters ^^ Love your writing, the AI pics (even when it don't understand what pokémon it is the "in the place of" are great) and all. Continu like that, I hope that when you'll hit the 9 gen you'll continu with others pokémons, such are starters <3

 And secondly, I wanted to ask if there will be egg laying. It would be so hot that at the end of Hoenn when we go on the boat the pokémons of Kanto have their water break and we have an egg laying scene for each :3

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I'm not the dev and ill admit I don't really wanna see egg laying BUT, the main factor would be how the AI would handle something like that. Other factors include the structure of the ship scenes which currently aren't setup for egg laying to be a thing and as we get more and more legendarys per generation to do individual egg laying scenes would be alot, along with all the other ship events like the Anal Whore Club, human photos and miscellaneous. Basically alot of work that might not even work well with the AI for a scene that would need to play once. Also, development of pregnancy seems to occur while the player is away as they are in an area canonically for a decent amount of time so to me it would make sense for them to give birth while the player is away. This is just me and I'm not the dev just what I think who knows they may do it and if they do its not like a deal breaker.  

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Getting the AI to generate laying pictures has proven damn near impossible so far, every now and then I've been lucky to get one but they were usually low quality (and that's by MY standards)

I'm probably going to write out some laying scenes but only for the Main Legendarys like Mewtwo, Lugia or Ho-Oh, the images I add will be them with their eggs after the laying is done

I tried some times to do egg laying things, it rarely worked so I was thinking like you for the pics : the legends with the eggs around if no laying pics was good. And, I'm happy that you'll do some egg laying, thanks <3

I like to come in here with multiple questions but I only have two 

1. How has progress been for the past 2 weeks? (when last checked in)

2. Have you done Janine yet? (hoping you didn't forgor)

1. Progress is going well, I've finished all the Legendarys and only have one Human left to do
There's still work to do for the Downtime and Ship sections, then I want to playtest for a couple days to make sure it's all working

2. Janine was one of the first things I did for this update, to make sure she didn't get forgotten!
Also, I've experimented a little with adding some side scenes into the chapters, I'm using these to add non-legendary Mons into the game, that way I can put in some fan favourites or requests, it's just one scene per Mon and a couple of pictures though, nothing complex

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Nice to see the side scenes, I have ideas for some of those actually outside of obvious like Gardevoir or Vaporeon. My main idea is about how each generation has a pseudo legendary which while being a fan term is acknowledged as a thing by gamefreak. Those mons seem fitting to be included (currently its Dragonite,  Tyranitar and Salamence)

That's a good idea  this ons in side-scenes ! I sure hope that, like the human girls, we will have a progress pic of their pregnancies :3 And if I had only one request, it would be zoroark <3

How many chapters are you thinking to create?

they plan on going just to unova and any further if they want

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I'd like to get up to 9 to cover all the games if I can
But I'll consider this game a success if I make it to 5

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Can we get a guess on the time frame of the release like a few weeks a month 

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While I'm not the creator it seems clear that the update will be done start of march end of February if current apparent pace is to be believed. Tho this is my guess and this shouldn't be treated as a fact

It should be done by March, but I don't want to be specific in case I get delayed

Ok just asking so I could  mark my calender

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How complete is the chapter rn?

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I've finished 6 Legendarys and their respective Humans
There's still 3 of each to do, then the Downtime and Ship Scenes
After that will be the testing to make sure it all works

I'd say I'm about 60-65% done

You weren't kidding about the game speeding up after finishing Deoxys lol. that or you did some legendarys between Registeel and Deoxys

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Nope, it went Regis, Deoxys, Goudon, Kyogre
I'm onto Rayquaza now, Jirachi will be after that and I'll finish with the Latis

When is Chapters 4,5,6,7,and 8 going to happen

When they happen

Chapter 4 will most likely come out some time after Chapter 3
That's all I can say

Add frostlass

The creator has talked about the possibility of putting in some non-legendary scenes into the game, but that was from months ago and the legendarys take the main priority. Maybe they will add fan-favourite non-legendarys to the game as like mini updates between main regions where they get a minor scene but up to them what they do. 

Like Blahblahdo said, I might add Froslass but only as a quick scene, not as a capturable Mon

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